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I'm in a Photoshop class again, with a midterm project to re-create an advertisement.

I picked this image, and found photos from Thinkstock (AI has an account, so we can use them for projects) to composite my own version.

composited image of a sea turtle with a tire for a shell

It's made up of four images- two for the turtle, the tire, and the background. I feel like everything is fairly well integrated except the water inside the tire, which is the only thing I've built from scratch.

So I'm wondering if anyone could give me suggestions for the water inside the tire? It looks a ton better than earlier versions, but it still definitely lacks the sense of realism I'm aiming for.

Any other critique would also be appreciated, of course! Thank you!

(I'll be adding in the text and border, but I want to get this part looking right first.)
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I haven't don't much since last night on this, but I thought you all might enjoy seeing it more in context. I'd still love to get any critique or feedback you might have on this!
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There are definitely a few things I know I need to work on.

The background images for one thing... I'd love to be able to hammer out another 4-5 of those to work with, make them match up with the more recent ones I did (You can tell which are the more recent ones pretty easily, I think)

It's a typography class, so I've really been trying to focus on getting the text looking good. I haven't spent as much time on the back of the case as I should- but I want to get a better image drawn for it. >_<

This is due early tuesday morning, and has to be completely put together by then. I've been running test prints and stuff for two weeks, so I'm not too concerned at this point about anything going insanely wrong there, but it means my deadline for being done with all the DESIGN work is actually monday evening.

I'm kind of sick of looking at it and have been dragging my feet on it all week, but I know some of you will probably catch some things that could be improved on.

My enormous gratitude in advance!

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