Image critique? Movie Poster

Here's the sketch I did.

( Here's what it has turned into so far... )

It's a 'Horror Movie Poster' photoshop assignment. I'd love to make it look more... Horror movie-ey. I'll need to put in more text, we're supposed to have credits in there and stuff.
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I think it has a lot of issues, not least of which is that I need to integrate the separate images better. There's definitely a cut and paste feel going on that I'm not pleased with.

I've also been staring at it too long and would love a set or two of fresh eyes on it. It's due thursday morning but it needs to be printed at 11X17" before then which means taking it to office max tomorrow evening. I have other projects I'm working on too, so I don't have a ton of time to give to this project. Otherwise it'd be fun to just goof around with this a lot more and maybe bring it to a totally different level.

But I don't have a TON of respect for this teacher so eh. It doesn't matter too much.

Movie Poster, part 2

I'm not sure if I should cut this for... gore?

Haven't changed much, since I haven't had a ton of time with it (Dumping most of my time into the CD project), but I did unify the color scheme a little. I messed with some other stuff but I'm not totally sure any of it's very evident.

It's riding an uncomfortable edge where it has a photoshopped look, but it doesn't quite look like I INTENDED for it to have a photoshopped look, which actually is kind of important. I'm not sure how to push it over that edge into 'yes, I do know what I'm doing here, I made it look cobbled together on purpose.' >_